The lighting was much better in this one. I really love your pitch as I stated before the in your face approach works really well for you and the conversational and anecdotal parts of your pitch really draw me in.
want to immediately state that was great work and a good improvement upon what you have done with your last two elevator pitches. You seem much more confident and charismatic in front of the camera and also have significantly less trouble giving the audience the info it needs through your pitch. That being said however, you did not include the other two written portions of the assignment, which would have given the viewer a greater since of your journey. Despite this, I thought you did a great job!
The lighting was much better in this one. I really love your pitch as I stated before the in your face approach works really well for you and the conversational and anecdotal parts of your pitch really draw me in.
ReplyDeleteHey Olufemi!
ReplyDeletewant to immediately state that was great work and a good improvement upon what you have done with your last two elevator pitches. You seem much more confident and charismatic in front of the camera and also have significantly less trouble giving the audience the info it needs through your pitch. That being said however, you did not include the other two written portions of the assignment, which would have given the viewer a greater since of your journey. Despite this, I thought you did a great job!